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Phew. Good thing you uploaded this on fanfiction.net too. My computer unfortuntely doesn't have to ability to open PDF files. x.x
Anyway, after reading the whole thing through, I can safely say that I love Laura and the personality you gave her. Something about her and Squishy together... just feels right. I'm looking forward to seeing more interactions between these two.
Cool! Laura just met the guys! Though it's going to be real awkward before she befriends female monsters considering how she crashed into them.
And aw Randy's still insecure and shy despite Laura's reputation...He's such a sweet heart.